The Big Bad wolf- making them sound mean

WALT-show not tell my adding detail in feeling rather then he is happy.

WALT : write to describe the wolf from the three little pigs story so people infer he is fearsome

The Wolf belongs in the story of The Three Little Pigs. He was doing what wolves naturally do, looking for kai.

His hair is never washed and is all sticky and dusty. 

He has bitten chunky ears all sticky and bad.

He has big ominous white eyes staring into the void.

He sounds like a deep ai voice changer in a nutshell.

He wears a big dusty old ripped shirt. 

Have you seen him around?

Space Crew Animation

!Warning! It’s a little violent so if you don’t like that then now’s your chance to leave.

So me (Elliot) and Eli have been working on this Animation about a game called among us. You might know what it is, so if you don’t Google it. I don’t want to type what the game is about and I will change the animation from time to time so that’s about it. Bye!

Can you please tell me what you like about our animation? And tell me some cool ideas for it.